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	<title>Comments on: Free Write: Time</title>
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		<title>By: MsQ</title>
		<link>http://qmusings.com/2008/06/08/free-write-time/comment-page-1/#comment-84785</link>
		<dc:creator>MsQ</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 15 Jun 2008 16:54:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;strong&gt;Derek: &lt;/strong&gt;I like using dialog to characterize as opposed to writing, &quot;She was snooty.&quot; - so I would rather select &quot;snooty&quot; words than write that a person was snooty. 

Many books on writing advise : &quot;Show don&#039;t tell&quot; and it&#039;s been fun to try to write this way. I have been playing with short sentences - I used to write much longer complex sentences but now I tend to break thoughts up into shorter sentences. But that can also be boring or tiring. Writing has a rhythm and flow - the word choices, the sentence structure - all have a way of affecting the mood of the reader. 

I&#039;ve tried fictional writing and I found it&#039;s not my strength. People seem to like my voice as opposed to a fictional character&#039;s &quot;voice.&quot;

I&#039;d say that the essay is the closest thing to writing that I like best, which is odd since I had to crank them out for high school.  I like taking a thought or idea and wrapping it up tidily.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong>Derek: </strong>I like using dialog to characterize as opposed to writing, &#8220;She was snooty.&#8221; &#8211; so I would rather select &#8220;snooty&#8221; words than write that a person was snooty. </p>
<p>Many books on writing advise : &#8220;Show don&#8217;t tell&#8221; and it&#8217;s been fun to try to write this way. I have been playing with short sentences &#8211; I used to write much longer complex sentences but now I tend to break thoughts up into shorter sentences. But that can also be boring or tiring. Writing has a rhythm and flow &#8211; the word choices, the sentence structure &#8211; all have a way of affecting the mood of the reader. </p>
<p>I&#8217;ve tried fictional writing and I found it&#8217;s not my strength. People seem to like my voice as opposed to a fictional character&#8217;s &#8220;voice.&#8221;</p>
<p>I&#8217;d say that the essay is the closest thing to writing that I like best, which is odd since I had to crank them out for high school.  I like taking a thought or idea and wrapping it up tidily.</p>
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		<title>By: Derek Wong</title>
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		<dc:creator>Derek Wong</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 14 Jun 2008 22:33:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I definitely think that there&#039;s value in trying different styles out.  Just like there&#039;s value in trying a lot of things out.  At the worst, you can just realize that it&#039;s not for you.

Of the specific forms of writing that you&#039;ve done (or at least tried), which do you like best?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I definitely think that there&#8217;s value in trying different styles out.  Just like there&#8217;s value in trying a lot of things out.  At the worst, you can just realize that it&#8217;s not for you.</p>
<p>Of the specific forms of writing that you&#8217;ve done (or at least tried), which do you like best?</p>
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		<title>By: MsQ</title>
		<link>http://qmusings.com/2008/06/08/free-write-time/comment-page-1/#comment-84656</link>
		<dc:creator>MsQ</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 14 Jun 2008 19:29:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;strong&gt;All:&lt;/strong&gt; This past week I had no time to write! Go figure!

&lt;strong&gt;UT:&lt;/strong&gt; Thanks for the tips and the compliments. I love how your writing is progressing!

&lt;strong&gt;Derek:&lt;/strong&gt; Strict or free expression? Hmmm. I would say I like both but maybe tending towards strict. It&#039;s taken me a while to break free of first being grammatically correct and then to start adding my &quot;voice&quot; and then to start letting loose. 

When it comes to writing, I believe there is value in trying different styles. I read a lot and have seen many different styles.

delmer: cable bills? Huh. I&#039;m trying to figure out how I track time and I think it&#039;s more like people&#039;s birthdays.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong>All:</strong> This past week I had no time to write! Go figure!</p>
<p><strong>UT:</strong> Thanks for the tips and the compliments. I love how your writing is progressing!</p>
<p><strong>Derek:</strong> Strict or free expression? Hmmm. I would say I like both but maybe tending towards strict. It&#8217;s taken me a while to break free of first being grammatically correct and then to start adding my &#8220;voice&#8221; and then to start letting loose. </p>
<p>When it comes to writing, I believe there is value in trying different styles. I read a lot and have seen many different styles.</p>
<p>delmer: cable bills? Huh. I&#8217;m trying to figure out how I track time and I think it&#8217;s more like people&#8217;s birthdays.</p>
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		<title>By: delmer</title>
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		<dc:creator>delmer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Jun 2008 15:58:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ve started keeping track of time by cable bills.  If something I&#039;m looking forward to is three months away (which sounds sort of far off) I think, &quot;it&#039;s only three cable bills away ... those things seem to come daily.&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ve started keeping track of time by cable bills.  If something I&#8217;m looking forward to is three months away (which sounds sort of far off) I think, &#8220;it&#8217;s only three cable bills away &#8230; those things seem to come daily.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: Derek Wong</title>
		<link>http://qmusings.com/2008/06/08/free-write-time/comment-page-1/#comment-83932</link>
		<dc:creator>Derek Wong</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 08 Jun 2008 23:08:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oh I remember doing these kinds of activities in school.  I actually enjoy doing it as well because it&#039;s a totally free expression.  At the same time, I also enjoy the very strict requirements (like poetry) because it makes me try to creatively use the medium.  Which do you prefer?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh I remember doing these kinds of activities in school.  I actually enjoy doing it as well because it&#8217;s a totally free expression.  At the same time, I also enjoy the very strict requirements (like poetry) because it makes me try to creatively use the medium.  Which do you prefer?</p>
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